(continued from previous three posts)
How can you be so sure they'll be human? I asked.
Because we're all human, Kel insisted. All made in the image of God! No frog-people, no aliens. Just beautiful, tangible daughters of Eve. Plump and ripe as fruit, man!
He leaned back, hands behind head, dreaming. A nightbird called from the edge of the forest, lonely. I shivered. We hadn't laid eyes on a living breathing girl our own ages since the fifth grade.
So when do we leave? I joked.
Just as soon as we believe it, man. Think positive! We'll ride the milky way like cowboys ride horses, he said. Slide down that path of light like its a river or an avalanche - ride in like heroes, man, like heroes! Just think!
We gazed at the Blue Planet, solitary, shining like a tear in God's eye. And it did seem ripe for invasion. An invasion of love.
THE END
8 comments:
Thanks for reading and for your comments!
Hi!!!! I want to read the story in one go - so will get back to you asap after I do so!! Take care
x
I love the image of "shining like a tear in God's eye". Well done!
Pat
www.critteralley.blogspot.com
Thank you kitty, and K9! it is wonderful to have animal friends, cuz they Understand Love!
I loved this!!!! It reads beautifully together in one go!!! It's evocative, sensual and quite sad!! I guess the first and second parts just threw me but it all makes wonderful sense in parts 3 &4! Thank you for sharing this story here! take care
x
meow and thanks, kitty
hi, Invasion of Love is a beautifully spiritual
story, i wasn't quite sure what to expect and
this made the journey more exciting and interesting - like a really great gift you
didn't expect.
your paintings are full of emotion -love.
if you have a chance please visit me.
thank you, ophelia. i will!
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